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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
This chapter flowed nicely as well. It was easy to read and to follow. Your characters stayed on point rather then jumping all around in the story.

You didn't falter in your depictions of Remus or Professor McGonagall.

I really liked how you stayed true to Remus and his insecurities. You made him well rounded, yet as astute as ever.

Professor McGonagall was a shining star in this Chapter. They way she wants to remember her "Gryffindor Boys" as they are was a wonderful insight to her character, which is mostly over looked in some stories.

Your doing a great job with flow and characterization. Continue the great work you're doing! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: I'm glad that you find that I'm staying consistent throughout my story. That's important for me and something that I strive to maintain.

Remus has always been one of my favorite characters and he's so complex. He's strong and resilient, he must be to deal with what his life has become..but at the same time, as you said, he's definitely insecure, especially about his place in the future. So it's nice that Dumbledore and McGonagall can offer him this, at least.

I loved writing McGonagall in this story, to see how she views these boys as her own and her heartbreak at sending them off to war.

Thanks so much for the kind words and the reviews!

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