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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
I really enjoyed this chapter. You kept very well to the characters, especially Ron's. He's moody, forgetfull, but remembers at the same time. If you don't get him right it just doesn't work. You've hit the nail on the head with him.

I really like Hermione's blacked out memory to. Sad, but an insight as to why Ginny went to extream measures to see her happy again.

I loved you descriptiveness as well. I have never been to Paris, but I know enough to know what the Efiel Tower is and I could picture it vividly in my mind. I also really liked how you used "Sandman's hangover" I've never heard it described like that and chuckled when I read it. =)

The only thing that I could see was that was confusing and I had to read a couple of times was Ginny's statement,“I really am sorry about that, sweetie. I was not just me, you know, I could never fill one of those out all by myself.”
The second 'I' was probably meant to be an 'It' instead.

I can't wait to see where this continues onto. Keep up your brilliant work! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I had a hard time writing it and I'm glad to see it paid off. I agree. I love Ron so it was definitely fun.

I've never been to Paris myself either, so that is why I refrained from talking about it too much other than the hotel room which was of my imagination. I thought it was a nice touch to be near the Eiffel tower, just a bit more romantic.

Thanks for pointing that out. I didn't catch that on my read though. I'll take care of that ASAP.

Thanks again!

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