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Review:cupcake_addict says:
Review swap! Sorry for not logging on, but my mind was drifting, and I really wanted to read one of your stories.

First off, I just want to say that this is the first story I've read that is Draco/Luna. I never imagined those two would be in a relationship, but I guess it's a good pairing, since they balance each other.
Second, I love your writing. It's very beautiful and it made the story flow very nicely. Also, you captured Luna perfectly. I really felt her, and I love Luna Lovegood.
Third, poor Draco. I've stepped on a Lego piece before. It was my little brother's. Let's just say I screamed some words that I shouldn't have.
Fourth, Draco and Luna felt so natural in this. Well, the whole story felt natural, and you putting Draco in such a normal situation made it mostly believable.
Lastly, you did an amazing job. I read this very quickly, and I could imagine everything in it. This one-shot was beautifully done.
10/10 Keep on writing ;*

Author's Response: That's ok, thanks for stopping by! I like to log on so I can see what Authors say back :)

1. I like Draco/Luna. You're right, they do bring an intersting balance together. I like this ship a lot
2. Thanks! I really had fun writing this, so i'm glad you liked it! I'm happy to hear I got Luna correct; she's my favorite character, so I always take special care to make sure I write her well.
3. I know :) It's the worst! I got the very first line for a story challenge and while this wasn't the first thing I thought of for "blinding pain" it was a close second :p
4. I'm glad! In 500 words it's hard to capture characters personallities perfectly, so it's fantastic to hear it flowed so well!
5. Thank you thank you! I really like how this turned out, so i'm so glad you enjoyed it!
I will always keep writing :)

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