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Review:Mischief_managed18 says:
Bela!! I do really enjoy this story and I look forward to seeing where you go with it. I still stand by what I said about that one paragraph. Ellipses just don't capture the emotion you're going for. They portray a sort of disconnected thought process. You take a pause web you read them just like commas but with ellipses it's more of a way to show that they're slowly connecting thoughts or adding things together as they go. Not frustration. That is all. Wonderful job, still a few typos but much better than usual. :) can't wait to read more. I love you!!
9/10 S2

Author's Response:' you went through this chapter so typos are your fault!!!


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Bella Bug

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