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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hey!

Just caught this as I was browsing...being all awesome and stuff and I practically threw my computer in the air with happiness! Finally! I am so mad at James though, I sort of want to punch him and kiss him all at once...and I hope we see a bit more of Al, I'd like to know his own thoughts on this whole situation. That is the most ultimate betrayal! Ugh, it makes me so mad! Oh, and my favorite part of this was when Lou totally kneed him to get him off of her. That's how its done, show him who's boss! James's interest in Vivian only seems to make poor Lou more depressed as it goes on and I'm hoping for the best! As an author that puts my females through alot, I'm feeling for her!
Can not WAIT for another chapter, my hunger must be filled!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Awh, thank you, I'm amazed how well this story is going down, it just started off as a little extra. I know, you should be mad at James, what he's done was definitly wrong. Eloise doesn't really know Al that well yet but hopefully I will be able write more about him in future chapters. Haha, total revenge for the tickling - he should really have seen it coming. Poor Lou, and I'm afraid it is only the beginning - she is going to be put through a whole lot more... And speaking of your female characters, I am desperatly waiting for more from Angelina and Astoria!
Thanks for the review,
GirlOnTheSidelines.


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