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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Hello again!

If the first chapter was brilliant, this far exceeded it. I think my favorite part was Lily. She was so superficial, and somehow, it fit perfectly. I'd usually be thinking "how did she end up that way with the brilliant parents she had (though I can't really call Ginny brilliant xD)" but in the context of this story and the way you wrote her, it completely works. She contrasts Rose perfectly, and the two of them together were amazing.

And then Scorpius. This line made me laugh for about ten minutes straight :P "It sounded as though a herd of hippogriffs was pounding overhead." SO EPIC. How do you manage to do it? You've managed to entertain me with a novel set in this time period and written in an entirely authentic way. I don't think it's ever happened before. I /like/ novels from this time period, but I haven't laughed at any like I did with this one.

I'm very excited to see how this continues :D I'm such a fan of your writing style and I don't think there's a single other author who could pull this off the way you can.

-Naida

Author's Response: Hello, Naida! Thank you again for coming along to read and review this story! It's fantastic to hear from you! ^_^

Wow, I'm glad that this chapter improved upon the first. It's more fun to write Rose out of her element of the quiet countryside - in Lily's world, she's out of place, and it will force her to adapt and develop in interesting ways. ;) It's even better to hear that Lily's characterization works even with its oddity - I never think about that kind of thing beforehand, though I really should. :P She's a product of her society, though, and that's what I really wanted to show - thankfully it came through in the story. :D

Haha, Scorpius is king of snark, only to have met his match in Rose. Oooh! I can't thank you enough for that compliment! I love being able to make readers happy while still writing things in different, often weird ways. It's a wonderful thing to make readers see something in new and interesting ways. ^_^ But your compliments continue and I don't know what to say except for a big, glomping thank you!


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