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Review:EverDiggory says:
Here from the review swap(: sorry for taking forever!

First off, the amount of detail in this is wonderful.

Second, this was sad in the oddest of ways to me. I can barely handle reading the Trio's weddings,because it feels like the end for me,so reading the their kids getting married.gah! It really,really messes with my head(:

Lastly, this was an amazing point, but there was one distracting thing--a few grammar mistakes. I do believe this is a one-shot (if you decided to continue it,let me know,I'd read it!) so you can find a list of people on the forums who will polish it up for you(: Actually, I am on that list. If you'd like the link for the list,PM me!

Kudos to you for such a lovely piece!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad that you liked it.

It was a very difficult piece to write for me because I wanted to show everyone in their best light.

I was quite bummed out at the grammar errors. For now this story is going to stay as a One-shot, but I am not opposed to opening it back up later to write a third generation type story. I would really like to have this piece polished up. I will PM you.

Again thank you very much! =)


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