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Review:Woodrow Rynne says:
Ouch. This was beautifully written! I loved the melancholic feel as well as the way you interspersed the narration with his present thoughts- very effective and heart-wrenching. I wish I could ever write something like this. :)

And the use of the word 'always'?- I don't know whether it was intentional or not- but if it was- very clever usage. :) Absolutely loved this one-shot. 10/10!

PS- btw, it's azimuth from TDA- I thought I would give this a read before I make a banner for the fear of making something glaringly different from the story :P

Author's Response: First of all many thanks for the amazing banner!

Yeah i was really aiming for that kind of mood, so I'm happy you think I've achieved it :) I am so glad your heart has been wrenched ;)

I definitely think you could write something like this! This was my first try at anything relatively angsty/ melancholy. I really had no idea how it was going to turn out. Practice makes perfect, so you'll never know until you try and judging from what i've seen from your writing you're brilliant! :D

I'm so happy you picked up on the use of the word "always". That was completely intentional :)

Thank you for this lovely review!

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