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Review:Timechild says:
Nice start.

I would suggest a little more detail. Like...How were each of them feeling when they saw the other in the teacher's room? I am guessing that they were shocked, but it doesn't say, so I don't know for sure. You should put that in to give the chapter more punch.

Overall...nice start.

Author's Response: Thanks, its has been a while since i have actually wrote something like this so thanks for the idea. Will include more its just finiding the time to carry on :)

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