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Review:sophia byrne says:
I wasn't going to review, but then i realised it was just too good.

I love you style of writing, and maybe you laid it on a tiny bit thick in the very first paragraph, there was scarcely and description in the rest so it did balance out, but maybe you could spread it more evenly?

Apart form that i thought it was a fantastic idea and it was wonderfully written. Any ideas on a sequel? Either Hermione's POV, or maybe what happened next in Draco's?

I also loved the sexiness and the atmosphere you created. Overall I thought this fic was great and you are a very talented writer

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Sophia! (:

I do sometimes struggle with that a lot. When I get caught up in the dialog, not much happens action-wise so there's practically no description. Trying to work on that. (:

I haven't really thought about a sequel for this. I ended it the way that I did so that the reader could decide whether or not they end up together.

Thank you very much for reading and for you review!!


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