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Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
This was so brilliant! I love so much how you've completely captured all three of the sisters' personalities in this first chapter; even as their childhood selves, it is easy to trace their paths to the women they become. The way you describe the littlest motions and interactions - Cissy getting her sisters to stop arguing and what they might've said, Bella's retorts, Andy's toe-wiggling at the end - is giving us huge pieces of their characters already. It's gorgeous.

I love how all three of the sisters interacted too; there's such a feeling of comfort and how much they are used to each other that is often lost and/or forgotten in other stories. Childhood bonds are extremely important, and I love how you're focusing on Andy's lost sisterly bonds to introduce this story about her and her sisters. It's almost a reminder that not all the Blacks have grown up alone and fed evil; the matter goes a lot deeper!

But this chapter was absolutely gorgeous; I can't wait to read more! :) Already I want to know more about where you will take this... ~TGK

Author's Response: Gosh, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I adore the Black family and I really wanted to connect the children to the adults - because none of us really change that completely, you know? Bits of you will still be the same when you're older.

I'm not really focusing on the idea of evil in this story (maybe another time ;) ), more the idea that they were sisters. No matter what happened, they were still sisters, still family and that was important. Blood is thicker than water, after all!

Thanks so much for the lovely review!
Aph xx

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