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Review:charlottetrips says:
Ah Ron, you're thick.

I loved your descriptions at the beginning because it really set the scene. You really took us step by step and kept it interesting but really just describing her getting up. I found that funny. I like that you had Hermione and her friends have the tattoo of "Survivor". That's interesting.

You got us all geared up for some romance and then Ron had to ruin it with his usual male-headedness. It's usual but also endearing but I can see how Hermione was annoyed. You totally described the natural action of a girlfriend: ignore it, pretend you're not mad while being mad that he isn't noticing. :)

xChar

Author's Response: Bless Ron, he is just trying to do what he thinks will make Hermione happy, instead he ends up thoroughly upsetting her!

I tried to make it very descriptive and fluffy at the beginning to set the scene so I'm glad it kept it interesting. I tend to find because I have a synopsis of this whole story that it is a lot more descriptive and well thought out!

Although the tattoo is a little OOC for Hermione I also think that she would have wanted to remember what they went through when they were younger especially as it's a lasting reminder that they all had.

Ron is such a funny character to write especially because he is just so clumsy and doesn't understand how his actions are just unromantic! I do that action a lot with my boyfriend so I thought it would be more real if I included it so I'm glad you liked it!


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