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Review:TenthWeasley says:
Hey! Dropping by with a long-overdue QTR review for you. :)

I adore Severus/Lily stories -- or, really, any stories about Snape in general! -- so clicking on this was a right-away no-brainer for me. And you've written this very well! I love all the emotions that guided each of your characters, especially Lily. You get the sense that she is really hurt by what Severus did, but there's a strength there nonetheless. She's not about to let him walk all over her, and that's how I see Lily, too, so I'm really excited I picked up on that here. Not a lot of people write her that way!

And oh, Severus. ♥ I just want to give him a big hug, because he clearly feels so guilty about what he did. I feel so bad for him. :( And when Lily called him Snivellus in that way, my heart just broke. A part of me does wish she'd forgiven him, made one more excuse for him. Imagine everything that might have happened!

And, as a quick note -- I really just liked the fact it was raining. It set the perfect somber tone for this, and besides that, I always love stories with rain in them. Not sure why. :D It worked well for you here!

I really, really enjoyed this story! And I'm so pleased I got the chance to read it, too -- I just might have to swing back by and read the second chapter. Excellent job here once again!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you for such a kind review! I've really been enjoying writing this story. I actually started working on it again recently! It's only supposed to be four chapters long so I can't believe I didn't finish it in the first place. Dx

I love Lily and Severus stories, myself. I don't see them together, but I do like reading about their friendship and everything that happened with that. It's incredibly sad to write about the end of it.

Thank you again for such a lovely review!

-Dem-

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