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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Hi there! Here with a very late QTR review!

I really loved this one shot. I think you managed to portray the NextGen characters really well for such a short piece. They each had their own personalities and you managed to show those distinctly for it being a one shot. The dynamic between Rose and Albus/Scorpius was one of my favorite parts. It was funny without being overdone, as banter can so often be.

A couple of nit picky things before I forget: "She looked slightly annoyed when Albus disturbed her and when they’d moved to the empty library she turned to trio." That should say she turned to the trio.

Also, you mentioned Professor Longbottom once and then mentioned Professor Sprout. I don't think they'd both be at the school at the same time ;)

I love how this prank was so harmless and so reminiscent of Fred and George. They had never aimed to hurt anyone with their pranks, unlike the Marauders, so you managed to capture that perfectly.

It was a great one shot! Both funny and sweet :D

-Naida

Author's Response: And I'm here with a very late response! I don't check my reviews often so I'm afraid I only just saw this.

Oh, thanks for pointing those bits out! Something else I need to correct.

I like writing humour stories; they seem to be easier than dark or angst stories. Aw, these lovely comments from you make me want to write again. Thank you!

-Sophia



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