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Review:BoOkWoRm24 says:
Hey so I really enjoyed your story so far. I've been having some trouble finding a well done Albus-Rose-Scorpius first year story and this really made my day. I think my favorite line so far was the last one in the second chapter. It was something along the lines of 'and Rose Weasley was far to sensible to waster her time' (thats not it verbatem but you know what I'm talking about) It was a perfect sentence to end that chapter on as it summed up Rose as a character so perfectly. I thought the whole hope you make Slytherin hope you don't make Slytherin cute. It was a good way to have Scorpius and Albus interact at first. I also like that you brought up the whole mudblood thing without having Scorpius be all like 'I love muggles because I'm not like my father'. In fact, Scorpius seems to be on good terms with Draco and that in itself made me want to read the story that much more. Good begining, can't wait to see what you do with the rest of the year.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like the story and characterizations, and am especially glad to see someone enjoying the, for lack of a better term, familial political subtleties* of a post-war wizarding world.

*Personally, I've never liked stories where the Malfoy family members are at odds with one another. You can say a lot of horrible things about Draco's parents, but their one redeeming quality was always that they loved their kid. I see no reason why Draco would not be the same way, since he clearly wanted to grow up to be Lucius. So frankly, I think Scorpius wants to do the same: his daddy's his hero. Which terrifies Draco, but what can he do about it? ;)

Anyway, sorry to ramble...it's just hard to find Happy Malfoy Family stories, which is one of the reasons honestly why I wrote this, so I'm just really happy to find someone out there enjoying it for that reason. Thank you.

(Also, apologies for the very delayed review response, I only just realized that one can do that here. Oops.)


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