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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
Hi there! Here with a very VERY late QTR review :)

If you were trying to make this sound like something out of Tales of Beedle the Bard, you very much suceeded. It read like a fairy tale. I was super impressed with how elegantly you wrote it. And the style fit so perfectly with the dark, twisted sense of humor you had through the whole thing. Because while on the outside, it really was just a tale with a moral, but if you thought about it for a while, the irony and humor of it was amazing. I mean, being pecked to death be chickens. That's just brilliant

"The old crone, who was soon overcome by the flapping birds and their incessant pecking, stopped grabbing at the chickens in her attempt to rid herself of them and fell to the ground: dead." That was one of the best lines I have ever read in fanfiction. Along with a few others, the way you wrote them coupled with the fact that these are /chickens/ made it absolutely brilliant.

Excellent job on this one shot!

-Naida

Author's Response: Hahaha! I did wonder when you guys would stop slacking ;) Nah, it's fine. Haha ^_^

Thank you so much for the review. This was a piece of coursework for my creating texts portion of my English Language course. I'm pretty darn glad it sounds like it's from Tales of Beedle the Bard... I studied all of the stories in that book inside out for months to try to nail this xD. I'm pretty chuffed that you enjoyed it so much too!

It is? Wow, thank you! I guess it's brilliantly ridiculous, ahaha. The whole thing is really. Like you said... /chickens/. It's fantastic that you liked reading it so much, and even though I suppose you were obliged to give this review than you so much for reviewing it anyway (To be honest, I was never expecting to get the review I won anyway, so this is just as good as getting a random review!)

See you around the common room, and congratulations on being bumped to prefect. See you around the Snuggle Room ;D

Lorren.


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