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Review:Miss Muggle says:
Another good chapter!

I can see Bellatrix as haughty, but not yet the slightly crazed woman we know she will become. Andromeda clearly cares so much for her sisters. I think her character especially is very realistic.

I like each section, but I wish they were each a bit longer. While they get the point across well, they end too soon.

I really like this story. I'm glad I found it :) Please update soon!

Author's Response: Bellatrix is definitely the hardest for me to write and get into the head of. I'm hoping to show her change slowly, but we'll see how well that works out for me. :) I am glad you like Andromeda, that means a lot!

Hopefully some of the next chapters will be a bit longer then! Their length does sort of fluctuate depending on the amount I have planned for them.

Thank you very much - and I'm in the middle of writing ch 3, so hopefully that'll be up soon!

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