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Review:charlottetrips says:
This was written quite intensely. It's nice to see someone not willing to give their character their perfect ending because sometimes those don't happen. I think you took a very real approach with imagery and emotion, so much so that I was right there with her.

While I don't agree that she was being such a pushover that she wouldn't even SAY anything, I do get where she is coming from. Try a chance at love or lose your best friend? But she's got to know that it's going to be doubly painful when that girl falls in love with Lysander.

This was very well written and when she was thinking about the life she could live with Sandy if he felt the same way, it had such a sweet tinge to it but also that sense of hopeless longing. It was beautiful.

xChar

Author's Response: Hey :)

I am guilty as are many fan fiction writers to giving their characters happy endings although I wrote this at a time in which me and my partner had had an argument so that's possibly why! I'm glad you liked this.

I just felt that she needed to keep her friendship with Lysander as she valued his friendship and of course she knew how she was going to feel but she just wanted him to be happy :)

Thank you for the review


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