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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Hey. Here I am with the requested review.

Jane seems to be quite an interesting character. She is a healer which obviously means she must be clever but you have also shown that she is tough and full of determination by her willingness to tough it out.

I think you've managed to show the fact that there are tough times ahead really well by elabourating on the fact that many people are dying from poisons and things which would have typically been set up by death eaters. The idea of the increase in werewolves is also interesting and very believable.

Something I may point out though is that surely if there was a register of the werewolves then Jane would have known that Remus was one, and the parents at Hogwarts would have known that, but it's just a thought.

I'm interested to see where you go with the idea of people dropping dead and why that is. It's a very interesting concept.

I love the relationship you're portraying between Remus and Jane though. He seems very hesitant and apologetic which is how he is portrayed throughout canon so I think you're doing a very good job.

10/10 and feel free to rerequest!

Author's Response: Hey! I'm really, really sorry for the terrible delay in responding to you - I've been a bit stressed lately and as a result turned incredibly lame. :(

I'm assuming that Remus wasn't on the registry, or if he was, it's not something that's easily accessible. If it was, I doubt that the parents of other students would have been okay with him attending Hogwarts, you know?

Just my take, though. :)

Thank you for your review. I'm glad you think I'm doing a good job thus far, and I'll certainly be back to rerequest!


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