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Review:charlottetrips says:
Aw, that was sweet. I like how you didnít have it with all her memories suddenly coming back because sheís connected with Leigh, but that it made it okay for her to remember, easier somehow. My only complaint is that I felt there couldíve been a little more between Audrey and Molly regarding the revealing of Leigh and that relationship.

I donít think I had anything grammar or spelling wise to critique which was nice since Iím such a stickler for it and such mistakes can annoy me. But here, I was able to just go through the whole thing and enjoy the story as it unfolded. Iím a bit ďaw, shucksĒ of how she really didnít remember all 17 years of her life, but also hopeful as youíve given me a bit of closure on how she and Leigh are able to stay together and build new memories with each other.

xChar

Author's Response: Okay, more between Audrey/Molly. Got it. Thanks!

I didn't want her to remember everything or it would be a bit too cliched, but I'm glad you liked the closure with Molly and Leigh :D

Thanks for all your reviews! :)


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