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Review:charlottetrips says:
Hi, I decided to come back to just finish this story off since it’s interesting to me :)

Oh Molly you should’ve looked right away! (Why do people insist on yelling instructions to characters who obviously aren’t going to do what they say? Their fates already have been decided by the creator.)

Even though you’ve kind of glazed over the awkwardness of the beginnings of the new relationships between Molly and her family, I think you’ve done a superb job of summing it up with Lucy’s upset and her parents’ sadness and disappointment. Then you introduce this lovely scene of a family foodfight…

LOL, de-gnoming makes Molly a part of the family. I’ve always found it a bit daunting to write the Weasley-Potters because of how many people there are to write about and keep track of. I feel like you’ve gotten the family aspect down, especially Grandma Molly and her mashed potato ladle :)

So you’ve given us a little more of a glimpse of what happened to her that night of her accident. She was out on the street with a love of hers? But did he abandon her when she got hit? Because that would be way to no-no in my book.

On to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oh, I get angry with characters all the time. WHY DIDN'T MOLLY LOOK?
WHY ARE YOU EXPLORING A HAUNTED HOUSE AT NIGHT?
FOR GOD'S SAKE, JUST GIVE HER A HUG! (that one was last night, watching When Harry Met Sally)
Family foodfight... I have sneaking suspicion that if I threw a potato at my mum she's throw it back but I daren't try it!

There are so many Weasley-Potters. I reckon JK uses the Lexicon and HPWiki to keep track of everyone :D

Thanks for the review! You'll see about the guy... :)


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