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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Hey! I really like this chapter especially because it is for the Post Secret challenge. I would love to see the postcard you were given!

I love the fact that you are writing this about such a little known character. This means you have a lot of licence with her to develop her personality as she rediscovers herself!

I'm intrigued to see why Bessie said 'We have a live one,' as that insinuates there has been a big disaster in which a lot of people had died but then James said she was trying to kill herself so it's got me very interested into the story.

You have given just enough information in this chapter to make sure that we want to read on and the little snippets into her life such as her being close to James and her being good at drawing is really good!

Well done on this!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. The 'we've got a love one' comment is because Molly is supposed to be in a ward full of comatose patients, and I've tried to edit the chapter in order to show it better, but it hasn't come through validation yet.
I love writing next-gen because it's almost like writing OCs :D
Thank you for the review! :)


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