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Review:Miss Muggle says:
NO! I wanted him to fall in love with her too! WHY? WHY?
I love the way you captured her feelings in this. It feels very real. I love that she decides to help him "because to me, his happiness was worth more than my love." I love that line :)
I also really like that you included some memories of them together in their childhood. I think that really added to his feeling of friendship and her unrequited love.

Author's Response: I know! Bless him he was completely oblivious to his love for her!

She just values him in her life just as a friend rather than not at all so I tried to incorperate this in with that and include how I would have felt really if I was in that situation!

I'm glad you liked it!

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