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Review:accioHPFF says:
I liked this. It was really great.

I really like the transformation; that final scene was brilliant. I think the way that you explained how he was transformed was excellent, and the dread when she realised the consequences of what she had done was also really good.

There were some minor issues, although they are really very small, so that's nothing to worry about. They can be corrected easily enough. :)

I also really enjoyed the difference between the start and end of the chapter. At the start, she knew that she shouldn't do what she did, which contrasted really nicely to the end where she did it regardless. I also like the turning point in the chapter, where she visits Ginny and Albus. That was awesome.

I've never read a zombie fic before, but I really enjoyed this, and look forward to chapter two. :) I hope your write quickly! :P

Author's Response: Wo! Alright! Well I'm glad you liked it, first and foremost! I think it's funny, the scene where he transformed was literally the most furiously I Was writing and, personally, I think the worst written scene. Though I have edited it since you wrote this so it's not Quite as bad as it was before. I did do a few edits so I hope that I corrected some of the issues that you found :) I love that you loved my zombie! He's quite lovely, isn't he :p

THANKS FOR READING!

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