Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Elenia says:
Yey! You updated! And see, I told you I'd drop by on my own (:

So anyways, great chapter. I really love your dialogue, it's so fluent and easy to read. Just two friends talking to each other casually and that's what makes this story so real and believable. Which is why I love this so much. Oh, and because of the football of course d:

I really like Annie's character. She's so nice, and so down-to-earth type of girl. And Lily! I think you're doing such a great job on describing her feelings about her family, and about what's going on through her head. I think you handled very well the situation, where she was hurt about Annie not telling her about her football 'career'.

And the part about Scorpius playing FIFA? That was just hilarious! I could so picture it, him staring at the controller suspiciously at first, poking the buttons unsurely. I'm still laughing at the image.

But yeah, loved the chapter. I'm already waiting for your next update! Good luck writing (:

~E

Author's Response: Hey! I'm so sorry about the terrible wait for my response to this - I've been a bit stressed lately, and I've been avoiding a lot of things. Hopefully you will forgive me.

I'm glad you liked this chapter, especially the part about Lily being hurt about what Annie didn't tell her. (And, of course, that you enjoyed the visual image of Scorpius playing FIFA - I was really hoping someone other than me would be amused. :P)

Thank you! ♥

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net