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Review:claire says:
you know, i feel like loria's really an interesting character.
like the more we see of her (and louis) the more she interests me. for example, by the way loria talks about louis sometimes, it really seems like one of those girls in other stories that like a boy because of their good looks and their life goal is really to do anything in their power to end up with that aforementioned guy.
yet at the same time, loria seems so much kinder than those girls but you can still see the clear similarity.
i feel like theres this unconscious battle in loria to be either that girl who nice, kind, and likes a guy but doesnt really do anything about it or that girl who will do anything she can to end up with the guy. i feel like we're going to see a very different side to loria by the end of the story through her character development (:

i also love louis.
its like. i love the way he acts. like he's just so honest and he genuinely likes people yet he's not afraid of stating his feelings. however, he also isnt a complete twat about his opinions and takes other ppl's feelings into consideration.

i feel like loria and louis really do balance each other out in a way. louis brings out that wilder side to loria which we've already seen and loria would bring out that caring and kind side that we've also started to see a little off.

i dont think it was too horrible haha
just a suggestion, i think a subplot to this should be loria and breanne (and emily in a way) and how their friendship works out. i feel like that'll REALLY bring out loria's character

Author's Response: At the moment, her "love" is purely physical attraction, she knows Louis' a nice guy which pulls her towards him but generally, it all started off because of his looks.

I'm really excited to write later chapter's purely for Loria's character development in which she makes a lot of realisations :)

And I'm glad that's what you think of him because that was what I was going for!

Thank you for the lovely long review! And I think I'll take that subplot into consideration because I had thought about something like that but we'll just have to wait and see... ;)

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