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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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Looks like you're off to a good start, it had a nice and easy flow to it so far, the descirptions did a good job of capturing their moods and the scene, and i didn't notice any glaring spelling or grammar mistakes.

I had a hard time understanding why Hermione was acting the way she did. It really seemed like she was randomly mad at Ron for no reason at all and acting really irrationally. But then again, I'm a guy so I'll never understand these things haha.

Interesting beginning!

Author's Response: Hey :)

Thank you for saying it has a nice easy flow! I tried to include as much description as I could within this frist chapter to try and set the scene.

Many women are irrational and her feelings will be explained throughout this. I am a completely irrational woman!


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