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Review:LilyFire says:
I think this is as good as the first chapter :) You are developing Ivy fairly well, and the style of your writing is wonderful. I do worry about how amazing she is with magic though, simply because I'm afraid that she'll turn into a Mary-Sue if you aren't a little careful with it. Right now, it's great though :)

This chapter was different that any I've read as well...I like it still.

Author's Response: This is such a brilliant review! Thanks for my comments about Ivy and my writing style - I really wanted people to know where she comes from so I can sort of justify things that happen later. ;P Trust me, magic is about the only thing she gets right during her time at Hogwarts, but even so when I come back to rerequest the next chapters (which I definitely will:)) I'd appreciate it if you tell me whether she's turning into Mary-Sue or not. ;)

Different from any other? That's brilliant. Thanks again for another amazing review!

~Aimee~


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