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Review:apocalypse says:
Good chapter. I think that it did a lot for your plot and gave many details about the characters in the story too, particularly Anastasia. Her personality has been written well and it defines her completely. You've made sure to give away every detail of her past life so as to make sure that your readers understand her perfectly. She's calm and cool and I think I really like her. For some reason, I found the fact that she plays the piano very interesting.

Archibald and his association with MI6 was awesome. The fact that he's a spy is brilliant and I think that it added a great touch to the chapter. You wrote it like it was a scene playing before my eyes and I enjoyed reading it thoroughly. You thickened the plot in the first scene by writing about the discovery and I'm very curious to know what he had discovered.

Hehe, Duncan's back. I loved to see him back and working in the bar. The way you described is life being back to normal was amazing and it felt good to see him that way. Too bad Augustus found him; now he'll be on another mission and coming back who-knows-when. I like the way you're building up the curiosity of your readers; it keeps the suspense up and is always fun to read!

Until next time, Good Luck and Happy Writing! =D

Author's Response: I was hoping to expand some more in this chapter on why Anastasia is the way she is, so I'm glad you enjoyed that.

I couldn't resist using Duncan again, its just too much fun! He was definetely enjoying his new life, but just when he thought he was out, they pulled him back in!

Thanks a lot for the reviews!!

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