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Review:justonemorefic says:
omg there is something so hilarious about Albus being the pretty boy of the family. Albus Severus, the boy with the lush black locks. But paisley and polka dots and stripes why Albus, why. Do you not have eyes? If you're rich, the least you can do is not look like Willy Wonka.

lolol you are so awkward Albus. Ravishing! Now I am seriously imagining Gene Wilder in Albus' place for some reason.

Ooh love the historical snippet with Dumbledore. French revolution and all that. I can totally tell you're having fun with the regency ;D Carriages! I am strangely excited by the sight of carriages. They just seem fun. There are not enough of them at Hogwarts.

Oh Lily, you are overwhelmed. Hehehe, love this chapter of narration from her. She's like the meddling best friend of modern era fics, but it's just so much more fun in the context of this setting. I do want to see more Rose and her witticisms, so I shall tally ho to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Albus is rarely the pretty one, now that I think about it. Though what author could resist dressing him up in paisley and polka dots! The image is horrifying, yet hilarious (if you're not blinded, that is). LOL, he is dressed like Willy Wonka! That must be where I got the idea from! Wonka's pretty rich too, but riches certainly can't account for taste. :P

Albus is such a sassy fashionista, but now, I will always hear Gene Wilder's voice whenever he speaks. XD

It's so awesome that you're enjoying this story, especially all of the historical details. I'm never sure how many readers will pick up on them, though it's always fun for me to include them - it's probably the most inspiring aspect of this story for me, being able to fit the Potterverse into Muggle history. :D

I'm glad that making this chapter from Lily's perspective worked out. She's going to be an interesting character to write, being both the innocent and the matchmaking friend. You know what? She's like Emma! This can be a crazy Austen crossover! That'd be even more fun! *dances*

Thank you again for reading and reviewing this story, Gina! I can't express how much I appreciate hearing from you! ^_^


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