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Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
Ooh this was so gorgeous! I loved all of it and it DEFINITELY lived up to expectations, don't you go putting youself down like that! (Oh dear goodness, I seem to have adopted Aberforth's style of speech...) I absolutely loved the introduction of Abe! He was such a warm character, and I could see exactly why he and and Bella got on, as well finding him so IC :D

I love how they both had nicknames for their pubs and loved both of the pubs for their differences; there was no rivalry. And he was so sweet in helping Bella put her pub back together!

I also liked the darker side to this. With more of Bella's past being revealed, and her hatred of silence so prominent here, we could appreciate even more how much the full pub suited her. It also reminded of how much I hate Ministry officials...

But I adore your descriptions and metaphors so much! As ever they really bring it all to life and put me in Bella's place. I just adore this story so much already asdfghj :3 oh and 10/10! LOVELOVELOVE

Author's Response: Lottielottielottie :3

This is such a wonderful review and I am gonna just keep reading it and reading it!

Yeah, I wasn't sure what to do with Abe. I couldn't leave him out altogether as they are the only two pubs (we know of) in Hogsmeade. So I decided to show their friendship as quite close and amiable, even if Abe doesn't know /too/ much about Bella.

Haha, I hate Ministry Officials too. Apart from Arthur Weasley! :P

*hands chocobeer* x

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