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Review:Elenia says:
Heey! You had requested a review from me! (: Sorry it took me so long to get to you, I have no idea where the days went! Okay, I do, I was writing d:

Okay firstly, a Walk to Remember is such an awesome movie, so I love, love, love all the quotes you've used here, I think they fit your story really well!

The beginning was a bit awkward, maybe work on that a bit by adding more description and some background story, I think that would help with the flow a lot!

Other than that, I think the story was really good. I liked the hospital wing part a lot, and especially the ending. It was so beautiful! So excellent job on that. You almost made me cry (:

Characters were a bit of OOC, but that's mostly because of the beginning, so if you work on that I think this story would be really great! It has so much potential!

Take care and happy writing (:

~E

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