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Review:Elenia says:
Hey! I'm here! Finally, I know, I can't even believe where the days disappeared! So I'm really sorry for the wait!

Okay let's get started! First of all, yey! A new story! I loved your previous ones so much so I was expecting great things from this story. Didn't get disappointed! This was great!

I mean, wow! The plot is so unique and so interesting! Where do you come up with awesome plans like this? I never thought that people could show magical abilities AFTER the age of eleven, but it actually makes a lot of sense! Such an amazing and original idea!

Your writing is so brilliant as always with all the details and descriptions. Oh and the emotions, you get them come through so strongly. I'm always sighing here jealously (x

Characterization was amazing as always. I really liked Daphne. And the headaches she was experiencing, what an interesting idea! Is it supposed to reflect the fact that she isn't using her skills properly? I always thought something like that would happen eventually, that there would be some sort of side effects, and that's why it would burst out on situations when the person got aggravated, or had some sort of emotional burst.

So I think you definitely have captured the reader's interest with this story. I'm going to force myself to go away now, and not peak at the next chapter, because I want you to come and re-request! Even though I'm only rambling here, and not giving any constructive advice! But I hope I was still helpful and managed to at least give you inspiration to write more of this wonderful story (:

Good luck writing!

~E

Author's Response: OH MY GOSH! I AM SO SORRY FOR THE INCREDIBLY LATE REPLY!
Seriously how did I miss this!?!

Ok... on to the review reply, Thank you so so much for coming by again to read this story too! And I am so thrilled that you liked this one because this is a very different approach than I usually try out. I dont remember how the idea came to me but when it did I chased the plot bunny down and wrote everything I could think of... It's just the setting up part is a bit slow but I plan to move the plot along quickly from here on.

:) I'm glad you like the details its sort of hard for me to find the balance between too much and too little glad you approve of the way I write. I find it helpful when the writer creates the picture giving as much detail as possible :)

Yeah Daphne has magic just like anyone but no one knows why she hasnt shown any signs before 11 and why she's suddenly showing them now... so that's part of the plot development too. Callum is also an interesting character to write as I hope he is to read... I hope you find the next few chapters interesting.

Thank you so much Elenia for reviewing my story and SO VERY SORRY it took so long to get back to you! I hope you haven't abandoned this story on account of that!

~Pen2Paper


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