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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
Why are wizards talking about iTunes vouchers? Electronics don't work at Hogwarts. Also, I'm extremely confused by the scene in London. You introduced readers to so many characters at the same time, and didn't tell readers anything about the characters. Also, the dialogue was a bit odd there. The greetings began to get out of hand. I felt like it was "Hi" "Hello" "Hi there." They began to get a bit repetitive. Instead, maybe you could say something along the lines of, "We exchanged friendly greetings."

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I forgot about the electronics rule and I slapped myself when I read this comment. I'm really sorry about that =( You will find out more about the characters if you keep reading. I just wanted to put them all there and then explain them one by one. Thank you for the advice! xx

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