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Review:Moonyxluna says:
oh god. Ok, that hit me by suprise a little! Narcissa's gone. My mind needs to process this for a minute.

There was one part, the paragraph that starts with Lily apologizing for what she had said. When I think back to canon, I think you captured the way Severus felt about calling Lily a mudblood so perfectly. (I do realize it's Lily feeling the remorse here, just thinking)

Narcissa's gone! god... Poor Severus. But he's letting Lily stay longer! This could be good for her. Or good for them. I should just read and not make guesses :p I loved the little smile at the end from Severus. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, it was meant to be shocking. I wanted to capture that punch-in-the-gut feeling that Snape must have experienced when he realized that Lily and James were both dead. Poor thing.

It's great that I captured that well! I was trying to think of how he would apologize if he had the chance to properly do so, given that she died before he really could get her attention.

I've always wanted to try Severus/Narcissa, and while I could never quite make it work in canon, it was fun to give it a small try here. But yes, now it's Lily's time to shine, it seems.

Thanks for another lovely review! :)

Amanda


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