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Review:Moonyxluna says:
I loved all of the detail in the beginning of this chapter. The way you wrote about Lily getting into Grimmauld place was truly beautiful. I wonder what Bellatrix would think about Lily becoming so close to Voldemort :p

I liked your portrail of Voldemort here, you wrote him very well. Even though Sirius brought Lily to him in the first place, he still insulted him every chance he could. I like how she's taking the place of Snape, and I can't wait to read what you have planned for if she tries to save him.

Author's Response: It is interesting to think about Bella's reaction, isn't it? I think I tied a little of her up in Lily here, given that Voldemort clearly separates her from the other Death Eaters, but I didn't give her that edge of madness, but instead made her distant. I'm glad you liked my security measures!

Yes, that's it, a combination of Bellatrix and Snape, two of Voldemort's most trusted. I'm glad that you liked Voldemort, because he was super hard to write. (I feel like a lot of authors struggle with him and Dumbledore, me included.) And poor Sirius! He tries too hard.

Thanks for another very kind review!

Amanda


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