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Review:Moonyxluna says:
heartbreaking. the end of Lily and Sev's friendship was so sad! I like that you chose to do it a little differently, although if I think about canon, I could see Lily asking Sev to come to her and James' wedding. So excellent work, it's all so wonderfully believable.

I did love the inclusion of the "love is friendship set on fire". usually the addition of quotes (for me personally) takes away from the story, but I think this fit so well here.

The initation ceremony was really neat :)
I'm so torn. I really love seeing Severus happy, but I just wish it was with Lily! Again I loved Sirius here, I think you've written his character so well. Great work! on to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Hey! Sorry these responses have taken so long; midterms were last week and they sort of ate my brain. Better late than never, right? :)

I'm very pleased that you liked the quote; this scene, and that little bit at the beginning that involved the quote, was one of the very first pieces of the plunny that came to me. I thought it would be a nice little change-up there in the middle, and I'm glad you thought so, too. It is very sad to see them part ways. I'm happy that you liked how I did things a little differently and that it made sense to you.

It was fun writing the initiation ceremony. I'd always kind of wondered what it was like to be formally invited to join the Order, and I guess this is what I came up with :)

It's good that you're torn -- that's what I was hoping readers would feel, because I felt a little of that. I'm glad that you still like Sirius, as cruel and heartless as he can be.

Thanks for another lovely review! :)

Amanda


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