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Review:accioHPFF says:
Finally here to review this!

I don't know what to make of this chapter. It's left me wondering about so many things, and I really want to read on!

I really liked the beginning of this chapter; the first sentence in particular dragged me in. From there, I was hooked.

There were no real grammar issues with this, and I like the way that you used the length being only 500 to build up so much mystery.

I don't know what to say! Excellent job, and I can't wait to read on! :)

Author's Response: The prologue is actually the very first part of a scene that occurs near the end of the story. It's short and somewhat mysterious by design.

The idea is to provide just enough information to be intriguing, so I'm glad that it worked for you.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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