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Review:Aphoride says:
Hey there! New chapter! *squee* Gosh, I'm so excited!

Anyway, I really liked this! You seemed so worried about it in your Author's Note at the top of it, but I don't think you need to worry at all.

The plot is moving along nicely - the Broomie (love the nicknames by the way! Broomie and Hoggie... hehe) is broken, she has to fix it, Aberforth being involved, Garrett Brandon turning up for obviously nefarious purposes... it's all getting pretty exciting ;)

Bella's character is awesome. I have to admit that occasionally I do wonder when Bellatrix Lestrange turned up in this - but I'm obsessed with her character so it's probably just me! :D She seems so real - she adores the pub and working there and her family background makes sense when you think about it - I hope we hear more about them in the future, though, coz it seems like an interesting story.

Aberforth was lovely. He's almost the Aberforth from canon (kudos to you for that because he's impossible to write) and their friendship is just so wonderful! I liked the bit where she threw snow at him, lol.

Garrett is... fascinating! He will turn up again, yes? Soon? Please? He's obviously not necessarily a particularly nice or charming person, but he's real and interesting and ooh I just want to know more. Is he the guy on the banner? No? Yes? Maybe?

Still loving it!
Aph xx

Author's Response: Aph!! Thank you so much, you are such a superstar! This poor chapter was feeling very lonely until you flew in wearing a batman cape :P

Yay, I'm happy you liked it! I was a bit worried... Broomie and Hoggie, no idea where that came from.

Ah Bellatrix Lestrange! I didn't think of that actually. The two Bella's meeting! Lol, I have to put that in :)

Garrett will definitely turn up again! ;) And no, the guy on the banner is Aberforth.

I love you!!
LWG xx


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