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Review:Elenia says:
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This is such a cute story. I love reading about Lily and James and I think you did a really good job here with their characters. The chapter seemed very real and believable. I loved the mood you managed to create here, and I think this fits very well with the song. So great job (:

I especially love the last line! I think it was perfect (:

Oh, and I love your descriptions! I think they're really great. I can really picture the scene in front of me, it's all just so beautifully written!

Anyways, I really like this whole idea of a short story collection. Can't wait to read all of them! So keep up to good work (:

Author's Response: Hey there! :) Thanks for the lovely review, this story is a personal project of mine and I do appreciate feedback, but because I am not trying to write for anybody but myself with this collection, I haven't requested any reviews for it and how I can improve upon it yet!

I'm glad you felt that way about the characters, because that's what I was going for when I wrote it! (: The song part of the personal challenge is probably the hardest, because while I can think of many moments from their relationship that I would love to portray, I am now required to stick to a certain song and have that 'moment' build upon that song which is so challenging! (Try it sometime ;))

Thank you! That is one thing I've been trying very hard at developing because I think it's the key to making or breaking a story. It's what can really draw someone into the world you're trying to portray.

Thanks again, it was so awesome to read some lovely feedback! Really brightened my day!

~VioletBlade

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