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Review:fancy says:
Well this was certainly different. For a while there I was going through all the options of who this boy could be, and why Hugo (a detective) was watching over a boy in hospital? but then it was all revealed!
I really liked it, it certainly captured my attention and interest, and then made me extremely sad and sorry for poor little Hugo, living out an imaginary life through Hugo the detective. Knowing that, makes the "it made his parents proud" so depressing.
But I reckon this would work really well for another one shot - the character of Hugo going on an adventure, but tying it into little Hugo's day to day life? I don't know.maybe that makes no sense. All I know is I liked it enough to want to read more!

Author's Response: It was so weird writing this. Since it was so different, I wasn't sure whether it really made any sense. Im glad it ended up readable! Thank you so much for the review!
ps. and if i ever do get the time or inspiration I may continue this.

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