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Review:Rosethorne says:
Hi it's Rose m here with your review

Sorry it's taken me such a long time. I have been Ill and then we went away for a few days.

Anyway, onto your chap!

I really liked this! It's the first story that I've read that's set like this and it really caught my attention!

I liked the pace in this, it was a bit quick at times, but I think it suited the story.

I am another one that also liked the repetition of we'll make time.

I think your descriptions are really good, sometimes I would have liked to have seen a bit more though, there are times when it's mainly dialogue.

I think you have a good voice in this for each character and I think the characterisation is done extremely well.

I also didn't find anything major in terms of spelling and grammar.

Overall, really good job and interesting chapter. If you write anything else or need any more reviewing feel free to ask again!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review!
About the mainly dialogue part: I intended it that way, actually, as a writing technique but I guess not all like it :p Thank you so much for your kind review!

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