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Review:ravenclaw_slytherin says:
Wow! This is really amazing! I've always hated Dramione, and its cliches and immature drama, but this story made me a believer. This story is so unique: I love how it takes place on Hermione wedding day and then goes through flashbacks. The way you told two stories at once was very unique, and kept me, as the reader, engaged (no pun intended :D) from start to finish.

My favorite thing about this story is the characterization of both Draco and Hermione: they stay true to their characters as we know them from the books, but it's obvious that they've both matured and grown a lot since Deathly Hallows. One flaw that I've noticed in my limited experience reading Post-Hogwarts has been characterization: authors sometimes either have a character grow too much much so that they're unrecognizable, or grow too little so that they're unrealistic. I think you achieved a perfect balance in characterization, which really intrigued me throughout the story, as I wanted to learn more about the things that affected Draco and Hermione's character 8 years after DH.

I always loved your description: it was spot on and there was the perfect amount, so that I could imagine the scene precisely in my mind. Overall, 10/10 for an amazing story!

Author's Response: LOL "engaged". This is such a lovely review to read as it's been a while since this one-shot's been reviewed. This story is one of my faves (and I'm not even trying to be narcissistic! I genuinely like this)

I definitely worked on characterization here and I'm so happy to hear that it worked! It's how OOC Draco and Hermione can be that puts people off so I tried to remedy that here. Thank you for being so nice about it!

Oh, and as an aside, this story is actually my evil plot to convert Dramione-haters into believers. One more down, 2.1 million to go... :P

xChar


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