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Review:icouldn'tcomeupwithanawesomename says:
Ah... I can totally picture Victoire fifty years later, thinking back to the time that she had something with Scorpius. The melancholy.

How old is she here? Isn't Scorpius, like, five years younger? If he's not in school anymore it's not a big agegap, but I figured that if she was twenty or something he'd be fifteen which is a bit early to declare your eternal love. Well, eternal... I hope he'll be happy with someone else. And I hope Victoire finds her love for Teddy back, I kinda pictured them as the forever happy couple; almost too perfect.

I would ask what's with Teddy, but you don't need the information in this fic, in my opinion. As with Little Red, I like the way you make your reader feel what the main character feels.

You're very clever with words!

xx The Plant

Author's Response: Victoire's in her late twenties hehehe. Scorpius shouldn't be driving around in a baby blue car when he's 15 anyhow.

I think Victoire definitely loves Teddy, but it's tough. It's definitely not the same anymore now that he's sick and not entirely in control of his mind, maybe. She must ask herself a lot whether she's being selfish. There's no right answer to her situation, I think. It takes a lot of strength to cope with a loved one's illness.

♥ hehehe thank you again~ :3

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