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Review:apocalypse says:
Hey! This is apocalypse, here with the final review on this story!

Wow! This epilogue is all and much more than I expected it to be! I think the best part is that you jumped so many years and showed us their lives after so many years after the war. It was a very good way of ending an excellent story and I was really happy to read the chapter! =D

It was very nice to see John, Daisy, Roger and Lydia dining together. I think I too felt the wave of nostalgia along with them as they remembered their old mates and talked about their lives. You've done a great job in tying up all the loose ends and ending all the points excellently. Really, brilliant job in this chapter.

Aw, Lily's so cute! You've characterised her really well and I think that the fact that John sometimes thinks that she's her favorite daughter says so much about their relationship. You've made John an excellent father; the way he controls his daughters is brilliant and his response to them is just perfect =) I especially loved his feelings about the letter from Dumbledore. The fact that he would be so happy for his daughter and her abilities was a pleasant surprise for me. I think that you did and a-m-a-z-i-n-g job with his sentiments in the end! I loved it! =D

I can't believe it. This story has finally been completed and I'm writing my final review on it. It feels very weird and sad in a way but I'm very happy and proud at the same to have reviewed every single chapter of the story and made the journey of it along with you! =) Excellent job with the entire piece! Thank you for requesting this story! Until there's a next a time, Good Luck and Happy Writing! =DD

Author's Response: Hey, its hard to believe its over already! I've never written anything anywhere close to this long before, so it seemed rather daunting when I was first starting out, but here it is!

I think most people would have guessed that John and Daisy were Lily's parents a while ago, but I wanted to make it known just in case. I picture John definetely having a closer relationship with Lily than Petunia, which I think would help explain why both of them turned out the way they were.
Also, Duncan's daughter is Mary MacDonald, one of the minor characters from the Marauder's era, which I will more than likely be writing about more. I honestly didn't know who Mary was when I started writing and I just wanted to give him a typical Scottish name, but a couple reviewers asked if they were related so I just decided to go with it.

Thank you so much for all the reviews, I really appreciate that somebody was willing to read the whole story and give such great insights, and you really have no idea just how helpful it was. Thank you so much, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!!


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