|Review:||Bunny Animagus says:|
Haha, love it! This story is really funny, it's nice to see a Puff in these stories, they are always a Gryffie or Slytherin: it gets boring.
Yepdidoo, so I have like, just read the whole story, but I (don't hate me!) couldn't really be asked to review every single chapter, so I thought I would just do it for your most recent one, YAY!
1) It's nice to see Puffs as main characters (like I said before) because no one would have really expected Dom to be a Hufflepuff, good choice *thumbs up*
2) Rival Quidditch Captain, I'm surprised I haven't seen this in any James/OC stories before, because it's a good idea. Especially as she is a 5th Year so it's not like she would have the confidence that say... a 6th or 7th year would have.
3) James' cockiness, I've always said that (well I have said to myself, in my head) James /has/ to be cocky, it's in his nature. So snaps for you!
And so far, that's all I have to say!
Loving it, especially the fact that Sarah is Bridget Mendler O.o
Author's Response: I'm glad you like my story; I agree, there aren't enough Hufflepuff stories out there in the world of HPFanficion.
I could never hate some one who liked my story, especially if it's over some silly reviews. I'm just glad you were able to at least review one of the chapters; I love hearing that people like my story!
1.) I didn't expect people to see Dom as a Hufflepuff, so I figured it would be a nice surprise. Glad you like it.
2.) I'm glad you like the idea. I've read a few stories that have James/OC as rival Quidditch Captians, but usually it's their seventh year. But, I didn't want my characters to be that old (they were in the original story idea I had, but after writing out a detailed plot, I realized younger would be better). However, I didn't know if people would think 5th year being to young to be a captain, or something...
3.) I'm glad you like James's cockiness; I agree, James doesn't really sit well with me, unless he's at least a little cocky.
I'm glad you like Sarah's play-by; I wanted her to be blonde, but I didn't want to use all those play-bys that people use a lot. Plus, she still had to look young enough to be fifteen.