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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Ooooh this one shot is interesting.

It gives a whole different spin on the event after moaning myrtle was killed with Dorcas calling the prefects to a meeting about something she'd seen. You didn't really explain what she'd seen before though so I wasn't really sure where you were going with that.

I liked the fact that they went blind as it gave a whole different element to the story. I thought most of it was Tom's doing but maybe it was something put in place by the aurors!

I was scared for Dorcas's life a little in this because I wasn't sure what Tom was going to do to her when she found the snakes but luckily McGonagall is there.

I did like this one shot!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You're right, I think I should clear up what Dorcas saw in the bathroom before the story began, and exactly why she thought she needed Tom's help so badly. I did want to leave it open-ended as to how much was Tom Riddle's trickery and how many things were actually set up as safeguards by the Aurors -- Dorcas was out of her depth for sure. Thank you for your helpful review!

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