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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
What a short and loving piece!

The places George travels each have their own meaning which is important to both him and Fred but the way you've written this is so emotional and heartbreaking that the emotion seeps through every single word.

I couldnt ever imagine losing my sister or any of my brothers really even though we're not that close so with Fred to lose a twin, a person he has shared every aspect of his life with is just so sad!

I like how in Grimmauld Place there was still little momentos, I had never really thought about the other people who had lived in that place so the fact that it had it's own little meaning to George and not just to the trio because they had spent so much of their summer there was just lovely.

I love the scene in Hogwarts with the detention room and with the great hall. The part that really got to me was when you said that Hogwarts's heart had been ripped out because with the great hall being the central point of Hogwarts it really was true as that wad the place with the most life.

The ending sentence was just so amazing and so heart warming because it showed George was coming to terms with his grief. You also showed that with the bold statements varying from feelings of being upset to feelings of acceptance.

A very loving piece

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

I'm glad that the emotion of the piece came through so strongly and it also made you think about your own life. I despise my brother most of the time, but I couldn't imagine life without his constant (sullen) presence :)

I tried to make everywhere have a little bit of the twins, even if it wasn't their own, like Grimmauld Place. I liked and hated writing the bit with the Great Hall, because it was nice to show the love for Hogwarts and horrible to say how destroyed it was.

I'm glad you like the ending too, the move to acceptance of Fred's death was very important to me. I didn't think George would be the type to hide away.

Thanks for the review xx


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