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Review:hpgrl says:
Hi!! This if for the review swap :D

I don't really watch Doctor Who, but I'm familiar with the premise of it and have watched one episode like a decade ago :P So I could follow along. I love the first line, it really kind of puts you into the thick of the action from the start and it's an interesting, kind of funny line. The whole chapter flowed well, I think there could have been more description of the scene or the room she was in so that it could feel more real to the readers. But, apart from that, the story idea is intriguing, and I love that you're going to slowly unfold it for us backward with every chapter. And that Harry is carrying through for Hermione. Great Job!

Author's Response: Hi! Yay for review swaps!!
WHY DOES NO ONE WATCH DOCTOR WHO! At least your familiar with it. thank you! Yeah, I may go back & edit this chapter and add a few more description and imagery.
Thank you!!
Jaz


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