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Review:Moonyxluna says:
I really loved the personallites shown in Lily and Sev on the train ride, she seems so snippy towards him, but the Sorting Hat didn't lie when it said she was loyal to her friends :)

and then wow... such intersting sorting :) Pureblood-Lily in Hufflepuff; with the way her parents seem to be towards her I hope she doesn't get disowned! Sev and James are in the same house as well! The red haired twins, were those the Prewett boys?

Intersting how Remus and Peter stayed in Gryffindor, as well as Sirius going to Slytherin. I think you've got a lot of intersting things set up for future chapters, and I'm very drawn to this story for all of the wonderful details you've brought to play here.

Brilliant work on this. Stupid RL I can't read more 'till tomorrow! Great chapter!

Author's Response: She definitely is snippy, largely because of her upbringing and tendency to keep to herself, but this is a role reversal, so I made sure that she cared about him from the start (as he seemed to care for her from the start in canon).

You are correct, those are the Prewett boys! Good catch. It's great that you liked my sorting. Some people found my choices odd, but I'm pretty tired of the Gryffindor-Slytherin rivalry and wanted to do something different. By the way, that's not James -- if you remember from the first chapter, he's actually a Muggle in this story and makes only the briefest of appearances. The boy I was referring to is actually Frank Longbottom.

Thanks for another kind review! :)


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